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这是我的另外一篇英文日记也请各位过过目,把错误的地方指出,好吗?谢谢了

这是我的另外一篇英文日记也请各位过过目,把错误的地方指出,好吗?谢谢了

How beautiful is it!

应该是 How beautiful it is!~~~

It was the end of the trip.

应该是 It was at the end of the trip.

I won't foget it forever.

应该是 I will never forget about it.

It's not very big

应该是 It's not so big

Macau is an ancient city.

应该是 Macau is a historic city.

I hope I'll come again soon.

应该是 I hope I'll visit it by and by.

1.第3行 应该是How beautiful it is!而你的主谓顺序错了

2.第4行~`第一句。It has a long history.博物馆还是存在的,用一般现在时就可以了。

3.第7行~`第一句。It is an interesting trip."interesting"前面的冠词用“an”请注意。

4.其余的语法错误是没有了~`但若是要为文章打分的话,恕我直言,分数不会太高。并不是因为你的语法错误,而是很多表达给人的感觉都很别扭。比如说,最后一句话好了~为什么要用“soon”呢~?感觉是chinese english了~`