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How beautiful is it!
应该是 How beautiful it is!~~~
It was the end of the trip.
应该是 It was at the end of the trip.
I won't foget it forever.
应该是 I will never forget about it.
It's not very big
应该是 It's not so big
Macau is an ancient city.
应该是 Macau is a historic city.
I hope I'll come again soon.
应该是 I hope I'll visit it by and by.
1.第3行 应该是How beautiful it is!而你的主谓顺序错了
2.第4行~`第一句。It has a long history.博物馆还是存在的，用一般现在时就可以了。
3.第7行~`第一句。It is an interesting trip."interesting"前面的冠词用“an”请注意。
4.其余的语法错误是没有了~`但若是要为文章打分的话，恕我直言，分数不会太高。并不是因为你的语法错误，而是很多表达给人的感觉都很别扭。比如说，最后一句话好了~为什么要用“soon”呢~？感觉是chinese english了~`
